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My feeble attempt at fan fiction

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1My feeble attempt at fan fiction Empty My feeble attempt at fan fiction on Thu Apr 23, 2009 12:22 am


Ok, so I read a little fan fiction today, thanks to Jenny. It's hard for me to read, though- and I can't put my finger on why exactly that is. Which is funny, because months ago, long before Pillow Biters, I wrote just a little snippet of a scene, and then stopped, because it was weird to write. I think I'll stick with blogging! Wink

Keep in mind that I write non-fiction for a living, NOT fiction! LOL

Breaking Dawn- Epilogue
Warning: May contain adult content

His grasp on my shoulders became more forceful, more deliberate than ever before. His fingers dug deep into my arms as he pulled me closer. His taut, carved chest molded into my softened frame with such force that my breath departed from my body in a detached whisper. “Edward…”

Before my transformation, he would gingerly caress my lips, my throat, the nape of my neck, pulling away before he could pursue his rapture. Now, in light of trials that had twisted my fate from mere human to vampiress, his veiled sheath of hesitation had collapsed. Our thirsty desires took on a single life.

Our lips were hungry for each other. He pulled away again, and I groaned, relinquishing my innate persistence towards seduction. He tilted his head and glanced up at me through narrowed, smoldering golden eyes. With a glimmer of my favorite crooked smile, he continued his journey downwards, pressing his lips into the crevices of my neck, my throat, my bosom. His eyes rolled back slightly, and he expelled a throaty moan as he continued his exploration. Not a response to the thirst he had for my blood when I was afflicted with mortality, Edward’s thirsty moan now was the desire to take me fully, to take advantage of the bestial desires he had repressed for over 100 years.

Regaining composure and a slight sense of mischief, Edward slid his solid, muscular arms down the curvature of my torso and around my hips. The corner of his lip rose slightly, and he jarred my thighs upward, throwing me off balance and plunging me backwards onto the crumpled, white sheets of satin which had neatly packaged the bed before our torrid rendezvous. I growled, and raised myself up, forcing my arms around his neck, my fingers clawing his unyielding back. My mouth found his, my tongue grazing his cold, perfect lips and shiny teeth.

Using undue strength tempered with forbearing restraint, he easily lowered me into the folds of the softened sheets, kissing me tenderly before continuing his reconnaissance. The tousled locks of his chestnut hair tickled my cheeks, sending phantom palpitations tearing through my core. I surrendered my meek attempt at domination for the time being, and our bodies intertwined seamlessly, lasciviously. These sensuous moments would become our forever.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

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2My feeble attempt at fan fiction Empty Re: My feeble attempt at fan fiction on Thu Apr 23, 2009 6:56 am

Oh my goodness, Kim!! It's good and steamy! Smile

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3My feeble attempt at fan fiction Empty Re: My feeble attempt at fan fiction on Thu Apr 23, 2009 10:26 am

ROWR! It ended too soon....keep going!

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4My feeble attempt at fan fiction Empty fan fiction on Thu Apr 23, 2009 3:41 pm

OME Kim, you have to finish it! At least the first 10 or so years... Smile

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5My feeble attempt at fan fiction Empty Re: My feeble attempt at fan fiction on Sat Apr 25, 2009 11:05 am


LOL- thanks! I may write more- AFTER I finish my articles that pay the bills- I'm down four projects right now, yet here I sit blabbing!!! ACK!

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6My feeble attempt at fan fiction Empty Re: My feeble attempt at fan fiction on Tue Apr 28, 2009 7:10 pm

Whaaaat!? Dude...finish it. You know how much I loves the fanfic! Do it for me, pweeeeassse Wink

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